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Column 160

Three Teenage Girls: 1956

Intro by Ted Kooser
04.23.2008

I’ve men­tioned how impor­tant close obser­va­tion is in com­pos­ing a vivid poem. In this scene by Ari­zona poet, Steve Orlen, the details not only help us to see the girls clear­ly, but the last detail is loaded with sug­ges­tion. The poem clos­es with the car door shut­ting, and we read­ers are shut out of what will hap­pen, though we can guess. 

Three Teenage Girls: 1956

Three teenage girls in tight red sleeveless blouses and black Capri pants   
And colorful headscarves secured in a knot to their chins   
Are walking down the hill, chatting, laughing,   
Cupping their cigarettes against the light rain,   
The closest to the road with her left thumb stuck out   
Not looking at the cars going past.   

Every Friday night to the dance, and wet or dry   
They get where they’re going, walk two miles or get a ride,   
And now the two-door 1950 Dodge, dark green   
Darkening as evening falls, stops, they nudge   
Each other, peer in, shrug, two scramble into the back seat,   
And the third, the boldest, famous   
For twice running away from home, slides in front with the man   
Who reaches across her body and pulls the door shut.

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We do not accept unsolicited submissions. American Life in Poetry is made possible by The Poetry Foundation (www.poetryfoundation.org), publisher of Poetry magazine. It is also supported by the Department of English at the University of Nebraska-Lincoln. Poem copyright © 2006 by Steve Orlen. Reprinted from “The Elephant’s Child: New & Selected Poems 1978-2005” by Steve Orlen, Ausable Press, 2006, by permission of the author and publisher. Introduction copyright © 2024 by The Poetry Foundation.