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Column 005

Neighbors in October

Intro by Ted Kooser
05.04.2005

Though many of us were taught that poems have hid­den mean­ings that must be dis­cov­ered and pried out like the meat from wal­nuts, a poem is not a puz­zle, but an expe­ri­ence. Here David Bak­er makes a gift to us through his deft descrip­tion of an ordi­nary scene. Read­ing, we accept the expe­ri­ence of a poem and make it a part of our lives, just as we would take in the look of a moun­tain we passed on a trip. The poet­’s use of the words we” and neigh­bors” sub­tly under­line the fact that all of us are mem­bers of the human com­mu­ni­ty, much alike, fac­ing the chang­ing sea­sons together. 

Neighbors in October

All afternoon his tractor pulls a flat wagon
with bales to the barn, then back to the waiting
chopped field. It trails a feather of smoke.
Down the block we bend with the season:
shoes to polish for a big game,
storm windows to batten or patch.
And how like a field is the whole sky now
that the maples have shed their leaves, too.
It makes us believers—stationed in groups,
leaning on rakes, looking into space. We rub blisters
over billows of leaf smoke. Or stand alone,
bagging gold for the cold days to come.

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We do not accept unsolicited submissions. American Life in Poetry is made possible by The Poetry Foundation (www.poetryfoundation.org), publisher of Poetry magazine. It is also supported by the Department of English at the University of Nebraska-Lincoln. David Baker's "Neighbors in October" is reprinted from The Truth about Small Towns, by permission of University of Arkansas Press, 1998. Introduction copyright © 2024 by The Poetry Foundation.